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Thursday, December 17, 2009

Path Of Substance

What fear to take the path untrodden,   
              when what lies at its end is unknown,                
      what we think is ours,          
       is not our very own.        
       
Live for a reason,
           as good as it can be,            
    at the end of everything,   
         it will surface back to thee,      

  having crossed every path with just a clean heart,
  and no inkling as to what the result would be,    
  this is but another path to be travelled upon,   
  albeit to a place none like before.      
   
  It is a road everyone has to take,     
  some early,some late.                
                                    
  With a smile on your face,           
              you have jumped over every obstacle on your way,                  
  is this the last one, you wonder, 
  and leave everything to the One you have always believed in.  

  It may look a road full of thorns and stones,    
  but thats just a perception, you see,
  once you make your destination your destiny,
  the journey has nothing to be feared by thee.

  Realize each step that you take, 
  as it is more precious than the one you took before,
  as each one takes you closer to nothingness,
  a conjunction of peace and satisfaction  never more.
                               
 If good deeds have carved your life,
  there is no fear left to feel,
  the path is trodden with just one thought in mind,
  and the end we hoped for is known and turned into real.

(P.S This is on the blog on Nisha's request :). This is one of the most thoughtful and deepest ones that I have written....something really really close to my heart)

11 comments:

San said...

another masterpiece...n it jus keeps gettin better....an intrestin path indeed...good job...:):)

Preeti Ramaraj said...

thanks...need all the encouragement

Nisha... said...

Oh God, preeto.. again i tell u.. this one is on a pedestal! "will surface back to thee" ahhh. nirvana. :P

Preeti Ramaraj said...

@nisha..:).lets hope I reach above that pedestal in the future :)

Sumiran said...

I agree with Nisha...

Live for a reason,
as good as it can be,
at the end of everything,
it will surface back to thee


Deep and meaningful!

niharika said...

insightful..

pratap kaul said...

hmm really well written...loved the flow

Unknown said...

wooo dat put me in deep thotz...niceee ...i likd it...!

Anonymous said...

Thank You, Nisha :)

Preeti Ramaraj said...

@sumiran, niharika: It was for me too
@pratap: was blessed to get the flow
@merwyn:without ur comment, my blog is incomplete :)thanks
@anna: truly touched :)

Shraddha said...

Live for a reason,
as good as it can be,
at the end of everything,
it will surface back to thee,

Good man ! Had read this long time back-never got around commenting !