I'm terribly bored with this Monday to Monday test schedule(God!!) and I thought why not post something different.
This time,its a poem I have written.I can boldly say I am somewhat of a good poet and I usually write poems for my friends,on nature,on love,on life and on friendship .This time,I thought I could share one of my masterpieces(It is one of the best amongst what I have written)with all of you.Happy reading!!
Life was so wonderful that I didn't see
the reason was you right beside me,
your presence in this world is so essential for my existence,
my passion for everything i love
would remain incomplete,
without you beside me,
Life would just seem a moment when you hold my hand,
endless oceans in your eyes,I see,
Your laughter is music to my ears,
something which I yearn to hear,
without you here right beside me ,
my eyes are waiting for its love,my dear,
Gazing into the stars, I think,
my love for you is unending and pure,
to be loved is a wonderful emotion,
which is not destined upon many for sure,
My heart is submerged in the truest love for you,
I am mesmerized with just one word of yours or two
my tear drops on your hand ,never to reach the ground,
every action of yours is filled with love, I can see it, so profound,
when you are right beside me,
my heart seeks nothing else,
I forget everyone else but you,
why,even myself!
Oh,with you by my side,
heights never seem too high,
depths never seem too low,
difficulties just pass by,
Just for you to be with me,
Iwill give my whole life if it can be,
my heart would flutter like a butterfly's wings,
just to hear a word you sing,
when you are by my side,
my mind flies high and higher than you can see,
oh that feeling I feel ,its so so right, when you're here right beside me
Please Please feel free to leave your views and comments.Cya
11 comments:
that was so damn freakin awesum!!
damn! i want to read all ur poemzzz .....i actually wanna steal ur bk as i said earlier..hmnnn.......
but wow...how do u cum up wid such concept and all....too gud
oh! and btw to whom is this poem addressed?? ;);) i can sense l♥ve in d air..ahuh..
oh shutta....it actually isn't addressed to anyone..It can be later ;)
wow!!!i luvd it 2!!!!
i guess i alredy told ya ddat right??
an wow..its jus wowwwwww......
by da way...later??!!!
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm;);)
Well..........hmmmmmmmmmm
Mannnn!!! Its sooooooo awesome... reflects the purity and unpracticality in luuuuv;) so u knw how much i liked it :)
AAhhhhhhhhhhh................
yeah ...later ;) ;) ;).....
ahmm-ahmm!!
m still waitin 4 dat later!!!
but i read it again an am still mesmerized!!!2good!!!:):)
The fact tht u said it isnt addressed to anyone makes the poem even more excellent. Coz its difficult to write something tht u arent experiencing so beautifully...Preeti U ROCK!!! :D
my heart would flutter like a butterfly's wings,
just to hear a word you sing !
Sing ! ahem ahem !:P
Nice ! Itna pyaar kisiko karna di ! He will go head over heela after reading this ! Whoever the 'lucky boy' will be...
just felt like reading it again :) wishing it had come from my pen ;) or atleast something closer to it! ahh....
simply awesomme:)
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